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PostPosted: Wed 18:17, 25 Sep 2013    Post subject: hollister What Your Character Has to Lose Can Make

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The Godfather-what does he have to lose? Justice in America. Godfather wanted justice so badly that he had to take it into his own hands. He just couldn't afford not to have justice when his father was murdered by the mob in Italy, and his mother was shot in front of his face while she begged for his life. He was never going back to that kind [url=http://www.maximoupgrade.com/hot.php]hollister[/url] of injustice after he was shipped off [url=http://www.1855sacramento.com/peuterey.php]peuterey outlet[/url] to American. Here he faced another kind of injustice-immigrant injustice. So he [url=http://www.davidhabchy.com]barbour by mail[/url] turned to crime, while wanting his son to become legal, a senator. The search for justice drove the story all the way through a multi-million dollar best selling book and three movies. The don lost his life but the stakes were so high that they transferred to his youngest son, Michael. He had to kill off all mafia heads of the five New York families to get to his father's dream-in Vegas, owning a legitimate casino.
That particular element in your novel is called STAKES. It's believed that a threat to LIFE is the highest stake. Bestseller-kind-of books have high stakes of some kind. STAKES simply means the biggest thing you have to lose-the fortune, friend, life, city, a country, a world, a dream.
GONE WITH THE WIND: Scarlett's love was at stake. Many people think it was Tara, the plantation. But no, it was love. This was no ordinary love. The writer knew the normal kind of love would have fallen flat on its face "Well if you don't love me back, forget you. I can have any man I want. See?" She would have said, looping her arm in one of the Tarlton boy's arm.
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If your story has nothing big to lose, it's hardly worth reading. I did say "Big." I'm not talking about diamond earrings, a Benz, designer dress, or even your home. I'm talking about something that matters greatly to more than your main character. It's bigger than her, him, or it. It takes hold and drives your story to the end.
What is at stake in your novel? It can be physical or emotional. Write it down now.
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